Comments for Demon In Serbia Part One: Page 1

So, I read the comment of Angel. Well, maybe she has a gift, but I don't think that a human spirit could be so evil. If the second part gets published, you will see what I mean.

Sds, we were trying, and trying to get rid of it, house blessing, deliverance prayers, confessing our sins. More details in the next "chapters". I'm posting from my phone, so the number of characters I can use are limited, and 5 years are hard to put down in one "chapter".

Demon, don't take Angels words as fact. There is no proof she is a medium at all or that she has any in sight at all into your situation. She has deleted her profile, as well.

Freak, you are too funny (chuckles) and I am a female hehe. I work at a law firm but I have this sixth sense but yes these vibrations are no joke and it feels like I am talking to a live person when I deal with it. I can even get it to do things at times.

Angel9090: Dude, you should work at the FBI helping to solve cold cases. 😆

Hi, well the pastor at his first visit tryed to determen what was going on. (can't blame him) At the first visit he was sceptic about our experiences. He just asked us a few more questions about the haunting, after we prayed together, I thought, that this will make the beast come out, but nothing happened, like it never was there (the demon). So he left, and the next day everything started all over again.

Sometimes to defeat our personal demons (things from the past) we need to tackle them head on. I completely understand nightmares and flash blacks of a trauma suffered, and sometimes just the act of remembering can trigger them. Since it began in 2007 and ended five years later (2012) it's still a relatively 'new' hurt, meaning you are still processing it. So, I get 'why' you're having a hard time setting it down in writing.
Just a friendly bit of advise, when tackling something emotionally charged for you, try writing it in Word or even on paper first. Take your time.
Think of it as being for your eyes only and really purge yourself. You can edit it when you're done. Doesn't matter if it takes you a day, or a year to get it all out. The goal is to help heal yourself.
Then you can copy it all here (if in Word, copy/paste) and armed with all the facts, we would be much able to gauge what advise and help we are able to give. As it is, I'm afraid you won't get any substantial help until after part 3 (assuming that is the end of it, and that all your 'chapters' are published).

demonshauntme, I think it is a day where I give suggestions. I gave it to Angel a while ago. Don't be so sensitive to comments. It is the opinion of others about your experience. If what you have experienced is true, then you need not worry about others' comments. Take it in a constructive manner. As far as the memory is concerned, it is quite strange how our brain works. Certain things that happened years ago to me, the people involved including those who were not so very close to me, what they were wearing, how their faces were at that time, are still in my memory. So, I feel that what others said about your remembering the scores are not about your memory but what they intended was that you should have given more thrust to paranormal than the scores that is all.

And as Miracles said, if it could be said in a single write-up, it is all the better. Usually the second or third part will come if and only if certain things happened or you experienced after your write-up.

As far as your write-up is concerned, if you were experiencing those attacks, did others in the family also had such attacks like you said, "scratches, being pushed against the wall, thrown out of bed, locked out/in, thrown out the door". If they had, then why you people have not taken any corrective measures? What did the Pastor do? I know the prayers do help but with the kind of attacks you mentioned, it would have been better with a cleansing. And you never mentioned in your write-up about it asking you to pray it rather than God. Well, are you holding it up for your next write-up?

Please do respond.

Regards and respects to you.

SDS

It is long, and I don't have all day to write it. Thanks for the advice.

demonshauntme - some advice from a mod to all our members, including you. Just because a story has been submitted doesn't mean it's going to be published. We do have rules/guidelines we have to follow.

Another piece of advice. When a story is submitted and our members are already informed that there will be continuations to it, creates the mindset that this story is just that. A story. The only reason a story needs to be broken up into different parts is when it is excessively long. Or the parts have been written with some time in between, not a day or two.

This is all advice. You can take it or leave it, but remember this. Not all stories make it on our site. Actually, many don't.

The second part was written, and submited, there will be a third part as well.

Oh, forgive me that litle history lesson, about Hungary, but I thought that you should know that while I live in Serbia, Iam hungarian.

Thank, you for reading. And know that, I respect your opinion. It is a bit hard, for me to write all the details, because, some bring memorys back, that are so wild, evil, and horific, that I rather not remember. Hope you understand. I'm still under the influence of this haunting, still get intense nightmares. Notjustme asked a few questions, and here are the answers: I asked our pastor (priest) at the time, the first things happend, told my parents (the things I experienced alone), and talked to friends, our pastor came to the house, but more on that in the story. Friends who witnessed some of the things, said:"Well, I honestly don't know." and "I believe we all imagined the same thing" Now, about the scream, the neighbours asked each other to see if it was one of them, but no one recalls that they screamed or heard a scream like that ever. So I thought it was not one of them.

I don't see anyone saying it didn't happen. I see people asking questions, which is typical for the comment's section of every story.

Notjustme put it quite well. Every person will believe and do believe something different. Many people require a level of depth, leading them to request extra information.

Demonshauntme - The internet is a big place, and whatever you post on it will be judged by many. So, it's okay if some don't believe in your story, don't let it get to you. Because your haunting experience is very...what's the word, I guess, strong? Readers will need a lot more information before being able to give advice and decide for themselves whether it is a real experience or not.
But I'll tell you that a few of us are all looking forward to part two 😊

It seems to me, that some of you say that I made the story up... Well I did not, and considering that I lived days when I wished I was never born, more than half of my memories of that house are full of horror, I find it hard to keep a memory of the actual haunting in mind. Instead I tried to remember other things like my score. So as I wrote the story my mind was switching between memories of that day, so I don't get nightmares, and become unable to sleep well for a week. Please forgive my bad english. Ps: If you are wondering what this would look like if it happened to you, let me say that you don't want this to happen. I would not let my worst enemy (if I had one) suffer from this haunting. Ever since the first encounter I some times have nightmares, and flashbacks about what happened in the house where I grew up.

If you combine Notjustme, Miracles and BJJ into one comment, that would basically be my comment on this story. I am also a bit confused as to how you would remember the score of the game 8 years ago (I cannot remember my Battlefield score from two days ago). I would think that the experiece itself would take over as the dominant memory and the rest would be lost in the background.

I am looking forward to the second installment.

A city in my state, Taos, has the legendary Taos Hum- a metallic noise that apparently has no source. Your scream reminded me of that. Do you live near train tracks?

Hi everyone, the first thing: about the score I remember it because at that point the game was intensive, score was good. And it is the last "normal" thing that I remember before the attack, if you can call it an attack. Second: about the experinces of other people (including my family and friends when they came over) are as far as I know: some one calls them from the other room when no one was in there, sometimes we all heard it, some times only those who were called. There was also a realy strong feeling of being watched, some times we heard evil laughs, sometimes the lights were switching on/off, realy strong fear. There were some claw marks on the walls and some sounds of someone walking around us. When we prayed sometimes it was gone for days, but sometimes it got worse, more attacks, more evil laughter, and an "offer" that was: if we will worship it instead of God, than it will leave. The only answer to that was: worship only your Lord and only to him you shall serve. And that made it even worse, until it got bored of not having attention, and that we were praying no matter what it did. The time spent with prayer usualy was an hour or so. Point is, when the activity stopped the praying stopped.

demonshauntme - I'm with BadJuuJuu. I would have thought more detail should be in the paranormal part of your story than the mundane details of your day. I'm truly not trying to tell you how to tell your story, but elaborating on the "demonic" activity may not have necessitated in a Part Two.

That is very true, impressive you remember the score so clearly being that happened (if it did) 8 years ago.

Interesting. You seem to have given more thought and detail to the video game than to the alleged paranormal activity. Must be a heck of a game to have so thoroughly overshadowed demon attacks.

Hi Demonshauntme - Thanks for sharing your experience. Have you ever talked to anyone about this? And has others in your family experienced anything as well? When you heard the screaming, how did you know it wasn't a neighbour?

And CS! Love it lol...de_dust!

I look forward to your reply. Thank you.