Twelve years ago, I had a lot of sexual urges. I'm a guy, so enough said! The experience I had happened to be with a succubus. Never seen the demonic tramp, but I knew it was that kind of demon. It happened for a week and I had no complaints about the sex I was having, but I knew it not safe and healthy.
The succubus's name was Liva and she loved young guys. She always came to my room, wearing a tight red dress, had red lipstick on, and her eyes was bright orange. She was so hot and I was paralyzed to even do anything. I was asleep one night and she grabbed you know what and she told me, to just fall asleep. I wake up wet at times and numb. I went to the bathroom to clean myself off and I noticed I had scars in my back. I knew she loved it rough, but damn that was brutal marks.
I researched the succubus and the book confirmed that it was indeed a demon. I read and I read and it also says," it eats when it's hungry." I must do something about that demon and fast. It was my fault for letting her into my house, because my heart was filled with lust. Lust is one of the worse seven deadly sins.
One night she came to my room, hoping she will get a quickie out of me. She noticed that there was a bible near my dresser. She started to speak in Latin and she charged at me on top. I was paralyzed to speak, move, and even breath. She was going to have sex with me until I died, she said. There was one thing I could do. I could pray inside my head and I thought of all the good things in life. Then slowly I murmured, "I don't want you anymore." She disbelieved me, so she went on. I said it again, but this time it was loud. She got the message real quick. She knew my heart was not filled with lust anymore, but love. She had no choice, but to leave. Until this day, she never came back.
If any of you have this sort of problem, do what I did pray in your head. Demons can sense anything from the human perspective, so they can definitely sense a prayer inside a person's head. Until, this day I regret doing what I did. It's not like she wanted hurt me on the spot, but eventually she did.
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