Comments for A Future Fall: Page 1

I have a few questions. Firstly, how did you determine that this hooded being was a 'demon'? Was it simply because you felt a rush of emotions? Do you not think it could have been Seth himself, sharing his pre-death emotions with you? Why do you think a demon would stalk a graveyard? What makes you think one would be so close in proximity to a church? I find it extremely bizarre that the electrician and his equipment would just vanish like that. What was the electrician doing there, in a fairly rural area, working on power lines?

I have only guessed at it champion, but it maybe true you never know

EchoBay-well written and scary as heck! Maybe the electrician was your guardian angel in diguise. Do you think this Seth guy could be the soldier in your other story?

Champion