Comments for The Girl In The Potrait: Page 1

Oh my goodness!... Arghhhh!
Guys, have you noticed a new member whose screen name is "Elmosrapist"?!
Since our beloved bus is painted resembling the "Muppets" bus... Are we going to allow such disrespectful behavior? What should we do? 😆

I'm sorry to tell you but, aj_star has closed his account. I guess the evil little girl didn't get him.

Well done Troll Patrol, let's keep Your Gags Stories free of trolls.

Welcome back, Puff. I've missed you.

I'm sorry. I just can't take this one seriously.

Aurora Rio reporting, I have done my torso workout for today, LAUGHING HARD.
Is it time for dinner yet? LOL

LadyGlow:

"50 yards of dental floss and tie themselves together to avoid getting separated in the mansion."

Brilliant - first good laugh of the day! Cheers 😆 😆

(As he Breaks out a sewing machine)

Wow, going to need a bigger Blankie... Look at the size of those haveli.

Puff Bayram

Rebel Racine here. In fairness, it's only been 2 days, maybe the OP has one of those thingies... You know (stage whisper) A life?
Lady_glow, I kind of like Jack the Reappear... Maybe he's friends with Captain_Planet?

Guys, not so fast. Is any one concerned about the OP's silence? He agreed to participate in the discussion and, so far, he has been silent... Does it mean that he's befallen victim to the curse of the evil sweet little girl's spirit?

Shouldn't we organize a search party with the bravest members and go looking for him in the old haveli? Whoever volunteers should take their Sonic and, at least, 50 yards of dental floss and tie themselves together to avoid getting separated in the mansion.

Just look at what to expect once you are there:

Https://www.google.ca/search?q=haveli+pictures&oq=haveli+pic&aqs=chrome.2.69i57j0l5.8926j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8

And, perhaps, the volunteers could get some of that fancy cutlery still standing on that fancy dining room table? We could use it in future picnics.😆 😆

Love the names...

Of course the Hot Tub has lights and water jets... And a stand alone sound system as well, it is 'on the deck' so the music from the dance floor can be a bit muffled.

Chef Puff shall be preparing a Field Green Salad with the dressing of your choice, Oysters Rockefeller and Steaks cooked to order.

After Dinner DJ Puff will be spinning Hard Rock and Dance Fav's to keep the dance floor full. Please do not forget its an 'Open Bar' (sorry 18 and up only) at the Fully Stocked onboard bar.

Puff Bayram

All aboard! I really hope the hot tub has coloured lights and massage jets.
Tweetie Melrose reporting for duty!

Rook - That sounds like fun, the problem being once I board the bus the rest of you might have some difficulty getting rid of me 😆

I reckon a good name for me would probably be Sneakem. Yes I think that would suit me admirably, self-explanatory too!

Regards, Melda

Queeny ClayDike reporting for duty. Carrying extra supplies.

I lived on a corner street

I read half way and nearly gave up... Pfff...
Oh wait... Why am I flossing my teeth while reading this?!

A party is going on? Wait for me!

Wait for me! All I got is manually operated Oral-B's but I brought plenty share!

Geez. This was a hard read. I think I lost a few brain cells. 😆

Melda,

All it really takes is creating a Troll Patrol Name and helping to point out Trolls and/or submissions you feel are Fictitious.

The second part is easy enough as for the First Part... Your Troll Patrol Name; please combine the name of your first Pet (in my case a cat named Puff) and the Name of the Street you lived when you were born ((again in my case Bayram) thus My Troll Patrol name is Puff Bayram.

Membership includes free rides on the Miss Demeanor and full access to all its amenities including the first level Full Kitchen/Bar, the first level Dance Floor (complete with DJ Booth) and the top deck Hot Tub. The Miss Demeanor is a Full Sized, Double Decker Bus whose Paint Job resembles the Electric Mayhem's bus (from the Muppets). The rear upper deck (1/3 of the length) is uncovered and that is where the Hot Tub is located. A dumb waiter runs between the Lower Deck Kitchen/Bar area and the top deck so food and drink may flow to individuals on either level.

So...the question is...

What is YOUR Troll Patrol Name?

Puff Bayram

Myst - Thanks for your response. I am aware that it isn't real 😆 As Rook seems to arrange these fantastic events, I would love to hear from him regarding the talents of Puff Bayram!

Regards, Melda

Melda- It's a journey of the mind. Welcome aboard, let the party begin!

Rook - May I ask you a question please? Is the Miss Demeanour (driven by Puff Bayram) a magic bus which does pick-ups in South Africa or would I have to astral travel to the US to join in the ride? 😳

Waiting in anticipation for your reply - we have some wonderful traditional SA dishes which might go down quite well, "koeksusters" spring to mind!

Regards, Melda

By the way Tweed, how do you get there?

hahhaha PUFF! So good to see you again! 😁

Let's get this par-tay started!

Pounding Rock music can be heard LONG before the Vehicle its coming from is visible, but once in sight it's unmistakably the Miss Demeanor the Full Sized, Multicolored, Double Decker, Troll Chasing, BS Blankie tossing Transportation of the YGS TROLL PATROL. Thin Lizzy's The Boys are Back in Town BLASTING out of Top O' the Line Sound System...

"Guess who just got back today
Them wild-eyed boys that had been away
Haven't changed that much to say
But man, I still think them cats are crazy."

Puff Bayram opens the boarding doors and calls out abouve the Music, All Aboard the Miss Demeanor, prepare to deploy the BS Blankies!

Puff climbs out of the bus wielding his Sonic Care of the Saints so that the members of Patrol can board safely.

Reporting for Duty,

Puff Bayram

I second Shobha's comment. This story does not seem like a real one.

This story is a lot like an episode of Fear Files (a paranormal TV show which was very popular here in India) I don't mean to be judgmental, but all those things happening to one group on the same night, well it kind of sounds improbable. And, oh!, there is an American show called The Haunting, where our dear fellow member could have gotten some ideas for this story.

You have got to be kidding me.

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Ok...where to start? Let's see... I know: how about this house bring a MULTIPLE CRIME SCENE!
An entire family slaughtered inside, then countless others found dead in there with absolutely NO way of determining their death?
Then this house is just left open and not only that but knives and forks and furniture and pictures and boxes of jewellery lying around?
Oh...and then there's a gaggle (is the right term for a group of alphabetical imbiciles?) who actually know that multiple people have have died in there yet STILL go inside against all better judgement and apparent blatant warning signs of things being "not quite right"!
Reads like your typical cheese-laden horror film / story with all the ingredients if a quite frankly ridiculous premise and brain-dead protaganists doing exactly what any rational, sane person would do.
If only these guys had an Oral B 3000 Precision clean electric toothbrush on them, with its 8,800 oscillating movements per minute, and a whopping 28 minute battery life, they could have dealt with that pesky spirit in seconds!

Right, outraged rant over. I need a lie down

Regards

Mack

Tweed: it seems like IFO's are a staple in abandoned houses, though the most dangerous one I know about is in the following story:

Http://www.yourghoststories.com/real-ghost-story.php?story=12570

The comments are priceless, specially the one from the OP! 😆 😆

Actually now that I think about it, this is the second time an abandoned location as unearthed an evil necklace. Not long after I joined there was a story on here about a guy poking around an unused building or something. He took a necklace out of somewhere, took it home, and his housemate started sleepwalking and pointing to the necklace or something.

I was a newbie back then, I think I bought it as true, but now I'm not so sure.

Oh well, it's always a necklace, they never find a broach or an earring, just necklaces! 😉

This is it:
Http://www.yourghoststories.com/real-ghost-story.php?story=21840

Lady Glow, I like to play a game called F.E.A.R2 Project Origin, wherein a ghost little girl character from the first game comes back in the second game as a grown up hot broad and 'embraces' one in a very suggestive manner. It's pretty much a game aimed at teenage boys and frustrated men alike, but I love those first person scare ya witless games.
So I can only imagine the little girl in the OP's story was 'experienced' through the filter of a thrill seeking young man. 😉 I mean why else break into an abandoned house and score a cool scare from a young girl's necklace? 😆

Tweed: I guess we can call the protective toothbrush and dental floss on this one, after all, there's an IFO (identify flying object) involved... An evil necklace! 😨

I just don't get how the spirit of a sweet little girl could turn into such powerful and malevolent entity. Any idea?

Jeesh what is it with long paragraphs lately?

Isn't this the dental floss story or something? It sounds so familiar to that.

Anywhoo, both reminded me of the time a few of us visited a cool old abandon house. It was a very peaceful afternoon in an awesome forest block. Nothing paranormal happened, it was just a really nice day. 😲

Sheetal,

Eeh I'm thinking I'm reading a plot to so many horror flicks. This is way too similar to all of them. I am an avid fan of scary movies, not the blood and gore type.

Im on the fence with this one. Just about the jump over.

The story is really interesting like I'm watching any movie or something. But the suggestion is that you should not go to such places just to make fun, because ghost soul can follow you even after living that place.

Be careful.

*Jack the Ripper*

Never trust autocorrect! 😆
Need more characters.

A + B + C + D = incredible experience!

I couldn't help but to imagine your experience reenacted by Shah Rukh Khan, Salman Khan, Hrithik Roshan and Ajay Devgan, all of them taken down by frail and fair Karina Kapoor.

That little girl's spirit is as mean as Jack the Reappear.